FICTION FRIDAY: "Red Gold"
Yesterday I vented about K-Cups and waste and trashing the environment, then posted it to Reddit—where it spiked to the top of the environmentalism subreddit and got me about a bajillion reads in an hour, until some Reddit admin deleted it because apparently I've been posting twenty percent of my own stuff on the site, instead of the requisite maximum ten.
Anyway...
In light of the enviro-interest that apparently exists out there in the world, for today's Fiction Friday offering I decided that instead of writing a new short story beginning, I would post the first bit from an eco-conscious story called "Red Gold" that I wrote a few years back and published in my short story collection, with the thought that maybe someone who hasn't read the story can take a guess at how the story ends, and leave that guess in the comments. If anybody does guess, then next week I'll try to remember to reply with the answer.
Or, y'know... you could just go buy the book. :-)
Enjoy!
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RED GOLD
Reshin sat on a bare patch on the red clay bank, plucking absently
at the stems of long grass that hung mop-like over the edge toward the
sluggish, milk-chocolaty expanse of the Amazonian waters below. Thudding his
heels rhythmically against the clay, he watched as small chunks broke off and
rolled down to splish into the water
below. A bent, near-blind woman appeared around the downriver bend, paddling
her dugout with a steady thwip, thwip,
thwip through the fingered mists of morning, and splitting the water with
barely a ripple. When she drew near, he could see her canoe was piled high with
plantains, manioc, and papayas.
“Buenos dias,
bruja,” he called out in a singsong voice, as he lifted his chin in greeting.
She hesitated for
half a stroke, but kept paddling. She was one of those elders who stubbornly
refused to learn Spanish; and even though he wondered if she knew he had called
her a witch, he nonetheless meant it as a term of endearment.
He smiled. The
dank, rich musk of the Amazon filled his nostrils as the smooth-skinned cunchis flopped in the shallows,
twitching their tailfins back and forth as they fought over the insects his
kicking had knocked loose with the clay. A dove sent its mourning call out over
the water, and Reshin watched as a freshwater dolphin humped its slick, gray
back through the glassed surface to vent a blast that melted into the misted
wraiths playing across the river’s skin. The drowsy, waking sun began to rim a
few low clouds with gold, and even the squawking chorus of green peeweechos as they mobbed and robbed his
favorite mango trees seemed to fit, perfectly, into this glowing moment.
Despite it all, a
weight hung over Reshin—the feeling that the ever-muggy air was somehow thicker
than it ought to be. He was sixteen, and although he had only been a man for
the turning of a few short seasons, he nonetheless felt the fullness of the
burdens of his people.
He watched the
“bruja” round the next bend in the river, and his thoughts turned to her
destination, the Petro-Sur encampment where she would no doubt be robbed as
blind as she was—sent home with nothing for her great labor but a few cheap
goods from China. Reshin knew this because he had been to the government school
downriver. He could do mathematics and read, write and speak the language of
the invaders. He was educated. It did not take an education, however, to know
that the men from Lima would never stop to sit, as he did, in the morning
stillness. They would never rest here on the riverbank, enjoying the quiet
poetry of the fish and birds, and of the land they were poisoning out here in
the wild jungles; far from China and the eyes of anyone who might care enough
to try and stop it.
Reshin spat and
rose to his feet, stretching and flexing the striated muscles that told of a
life of hard work and inconsistent nutrition. He thought of the stream that ran
through what had been his favorite fishing spot; how it was covered, now, with
a lifeless, rainbow sheen. It would not be long before this river, too, would
show signs of an oily death. He turned and walked down the path to the chacra, where he would work the soil
until the relentless sun demanded he slip with his blowgun into the cool
darkness of the deep jungle, to hunt.
As he walked, his
thoughts turned to Cesar—the oil company foreman. When Cesar had taken an
interest in Reshin’s twin sister, Kena, the family had rejoiced. They did not
know why he had chosen her, of all people, but they were grateful. She was too
skinny for the tastes of the men of the village, and they had begun to think
she would never find a man of her own. Then came Cesar. On his very first visit
he had brought valuable gifts, and the stream never slowed of machetes, cooking
pots, shotgun shells—even gasoline for the outboard motor the oil company had
given them when it first moved into their lands.
Reshin grabbed
his machete from the log where he had stuck it and began to work. It had been
two weeks since he had finally caved and accepted the gift, and since that day
he had felt each swing of steel as a betrayal. The other men were glad that he
had joined them in leaving behind the old hooked-stick method, and was now able
to keep up. They did not know what he knew, and were happy enough that Kena had
a man—a rich and powerful ally in an uncertain future.
But Reshin had paid attention in school. He knew that the
slim-faced, light-skinned city men were not like his people. They covered their
arms and legs with thin, machine-made fabric and blustered through the hottest
hours of the day, never stopping long enough to watch the flights of scarlet
macaws, or to smell the life in the rich, black earth. Instead, they turned it
over with their bulldozers to make shallow pits for the heavy water and toxic
sludge of their oil-extraction—byproducts that would spill when the first great
rains came. When that happened, Reshin knew, death would spill out with it.
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How-oh-how does it end?
Please leave your guess in the comments.
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